An extremely sweet Lolita flash Animation

This is so exquisitely darling! I would just say that the line art is inconsistent in smoothness. The front leg is to small in proportional perspective, right bow could look more like the left to make the dress look more curvaceous and I don't know if the umbrella is translucent or not. If it isn't their shouldn't be that much lighting in the hair. Lastly if you added lighting to the hair and shading to the sleeves. You should have added shading to the rest of it just so that little shading you did didn't look so out of place.